Three Books All Aspiring Writers Should Read
I’ve been working on my first novel, Murder Pseudonymous, for the better part of five years now. I might never finish it. Every couple of months I get inspired to write and then, after pounding out a chapter or two, I lose focus. Either my real job gets in the way, or worse, I get writer’s block. Whenever that happens I hit Barnes and Noble for inspiration and pick out a book about the craft of writing.
I can’t tell you how many books I’ve read by successful authors (“successful” means they make their living writing books) dishing advice to wanna-be novelists, me included. Here are my favorite three. If you’re a writer, or want to be a writer, they are well worth your time.
On Writing by Stephen King
Although King is best known as the master of horror, On Writing is perhaps the best memoir about being a professional writer that I’ve ever read. The book is an even mix of autobiographical insight and solid advice on writing. He suggests aspiring writers develop a routine that makes writing habitual and urges them to approach rewrites with a critical eye for superfluous language. Maybe his greatest lesson is how he approaches writing second drafts, which was inspired by a note he got early on in his career from an editor who passed on one of his many failed manuscripts.
Jotted below the machine-generated signature of the editor was this note: “Not bad, but PUFFY. You need to revise for length. Formula: 2nd Draft = 1st Draft – 10%. Good luck.”
King’s takeaway: Look for words that slow your writing’s pace and cut them. Adverbs are usually a good place to start. For example, in the sentence, ‘I ran swiftly,’ the adverb swiftly adds no value. How else is a person supposed to run? If you want to convey speed, use a different word for run, like sprint. ‘I sprinted’ is a better description and uses fewer words.
Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott
Lamott’s book is filled with great stories and practical advice from her years teaching writing workshops. The best writing, she says, comes out of being honest with yourself and with your audience.
The very first thing I tell my new students on the first day of a workshop is that good writing is about telling the truth …
Without the willingness to expose your true self to your readers, writing will always be a struggle. But the title of the memoir alludes to her most valuable lesson. It exemplifies the tenacity a real writer needs to posses. Years ago, when her exasperated 10-year-old brother was struggling to write a report on birds that was due the next day, she recalls,
My father sat down beside him, put his arm around my brother’s shoulder, and said “Bird by bird, buddy. Just take it bird by bird.”
This fatherly advice could apply to almost any seemingly overwhelming task, not just writing. But they are words that resonated with Lamott who later applied them to her own writing career. Any aspiring novelist can relate, too. Writing a novel is one of the most daunting tasks I can think of, but Lamott would say just take it bird by bird, and eventually you will have a finished manuscript.
Lamott’s takeaway: Bird by bird, word by word, page by page, chapter by chapter. Writing a book, or anything, is not so overwhelming if you take it in small chunks.
The First Five Pages by Noah Lukeman
If you’re one of the dedicated few who someday manages to finish a full-length manuscript, The First Five Pages is for you. Noah Lukeman, a former literary agent, has “passed” on thousands of manuscripts during his career, and he details the kinds of mistakes writers make that land them in the reject pile. Lukeman, like hundreds of other agents, usually makes up his mind after reading just the first five pages of a manuscript, and if he sees any of these telltale signs of sloppy writing, he automatically passes.
Lukeman covers common writing mistakes and offers solutions. He covers hooks, pacing, overuse of adjectives and adverbs, characterization, dialogue, and even mistakes many people make in the submission process itself.
Writing is, of course, an art. Lukeman’s tips are definitely helpful, but they are certainly no guarantee of success. It still boils down to hard work and practice, just like any other art.
It can take years for a pianist to develop dual hand and multiple finger coordination. Why do writers assume they can just “write” with no training whatsoever, and then expect, on their first attempt to, to be published internationally? What makes them think that they’re so much inherently greater, need so much less training than any other artists?
Lukeman’s takeaway: Write every day, and be your own harshest critic. Practice. It is the only way you’ll get better.
So, what do all writers have in common? They write, of course.
The common theme in every book on the subject is “you can’t call yourself a writer, unless you write.” Make it a habit. Write a little every day. Even if it’s junk, write something. That’s what real writers do. They don’t wait around for inspiration. Trust me, I know. Not because I consider myself a real writer, but because I’ve spent five years waiting for inspiration and, because of that, I might never finish my book. Don’t fall into the same trap.
My questions for you
What inspires your writing? What great advice do you have to give? What books have you read that are worth a look?


Jim … add Steven Pressfield’s THE WAR OF ART to the list. This book will help you finish what you are thinking of starting (like writing a book) by inspiring you to overcome the self-sabotaging power of Resistance.
As Steven writes, “The more important a call or action is to our soul’s evolution, the more Resistance we will feel toward pursuing it.”
This book changed (and is still changing) my life.
John,
So nice to see you pop up on our Blog. I still talk about your presentation at the CPC conference in Miami.
I’ll have to read the War of Art after Jim.
Thanks again,
Drew
Thanks a ton for your suggestion John. I will go out and get it this weekend.
Hey Jim, friends have recommended Ken Rand’s “The 10% Solution” along with Donald Maass’s “Writing the Breakout Novel” and “The Fire in Fiction”. Haven’t read either but I trust the folks who have rec’d them to me.
Be well.
-J
Justin,
I’ve never heard of any of the books you mentioned. We’ll have to start a Tippingpoint Labs book club and read these!
Thanks so much.
For those of you interested in these other titles here are the links:
The 10% Solution: http://www.amazon.com/10%25-Solution-Ken-Rand/dp/0966818407
Writing the Breakout Novel: http://www.amazon.com/Writing-Breakout-Novel-Donald-Maass/dp/158297182X/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1251387600&sr=1-1
The Fire in Fiction: http://www.amazon.com/Fire-Fiction-Passion-Purpose-Techniques/dp/158297506X/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1251387628&sr=1-1
The War of Art: http://www.amazon.com/War-Art-Through-Creative-Battles/dp/0446691437/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1251387651&sr=1-1
Thanks again!
Thanks for the suggestions Justin. The title of Rand’s book intrigues me. I’ll check out “The 10% Solution” the next time I’m at the bookstore.
John,
I picked up the War of Art this weekend. Thanks for the suggestion. I haven’t finished it yet but so far so good. Mr. Pressfield will be on an upcoming Tippingpoint Podcast as well. Stay tuned for his interview.